Starry was the night,
Brighter the day,
You and I, met on a rainy day,
Shivering with cold,
Drenched in the golden pour,
You ran into the shed next door,
I watched you open your soaked hair,
I wish that was a moment I could save,
Trying hard not to look,
I pushed myself away,
Mister, sit down if I may,
The rain is heavy and the car away,
And she was a beauty,
How could I disarray,
Words froze in my mouth,
Hands trembled as they were on fire,
Relax, I don’t bite,
Here have this hot tea,
She poured a cup for me and she,
Thank you Ma’am,
What all I could say,
She looked into the rain,
The infinity seemed a reality away,
A pup was shooed,
Thrown away,
Rain falls in different ways,
Hold my cup,
I shall go,
And she ran,
The pup was in her arms,
The shed can hold three,
She giggled and laughed,
I saw your soul and fell in love……
Hey Harsh ! May I know for which challenge you have written this lovely poem?
It would be very helpful if you follow the format mentioned in rule no. 1
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Okay no problem. I clicked the link but it was not working. Also I wrote this for the first challenge.
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Oh ! I need to check that regarding the link.
Btw did you read the 1st challenge? Harsh, it was about writing a short story using prompt sentence ☺
Also, no alteration of prompt. Kindly read the rules too ☺
https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/19/miraclechallenge-week-6-dated-19th-25th-july-2016/
Here is the link. You can use it in future.
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Oh sorry. I thought we had to include it in the story. I wrote this poem in form of story if that is eligible.
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Yes ! The prompt sentence must be used but without alteration. That’s why, the challenge is about writing a short story using ☺
I would be happy if you write a story. Hope I’m not discouraging you 😔
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Okay, I will try writing a story.
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Thank you Harsh ☺ Hope you are not angry with me !
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Hahaha, why would I be angry.
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Because i can understand the effort you put while you wrote for miracle challenge and for the first time. Thank you 😇
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No problem. And you’re welcome.
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Lovely words
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Thank you so much Ma’am. ☺️
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You’re welcome handsome sir, blessings and hugs and kisses to you
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🙂 hugs from me too Ma’am.
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🙂 thank you
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You’re welcome Ma’am.
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Hey Harsh! This is so awesome. I don’t know how I missed it out on my reader yesterday. Beautiful poetry 🙂 Ye pic tumhare chandigarh ke neighborhood ka hai kya? Mast hai.
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Koi baat nhi. Hanji yeh chandigarh ki photo hai. Pta nhi yeh mere internet connection main kya problem hai reply maine ghante pehle kiya tha gya hi nhi.
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Koi nai. Mil gaya mujhe message. 🙂 Der aaye durust aaye 😛 Aur bhai larkiyan to mast pappiyan jhappiyan de rahi hain tujhe! LOL!!
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Hahaha hahaha, jo kuch bhi aj tak padha hai apne voh sab kalpanik hai. Kisi bhi vyakti ya jagah se uska koi nata nhi.
Aisi kismat kahan Mona ji, pappi jhappi toh kya apne ko toh flying kiss bhi nhi mili. 😝
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Kyu jhooth bol raha hai. Accha sun. mere ko teen quotes likh ke de na. 3 day quote challenge mila hai mujhe. Aur mujhe quotes likhna aata nai hai 😛 3 quotes likhne hain. Help kar diyo pls.
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Jhooth nhi bolta main. I am a saccha insan.
Han han koi chakr nhi. Jab ap bolo.
Ap Evernote use karte ho?
Ya mail?
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Haan na. email id doon? lisacel1507@gmail.com
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Okay main send karta hun mail.
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Okay thanks 🙂
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Thanks kam ke bad bolna. 😊
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Acche quotes likhiyo. nai to mai reject kar doongi. wapas likhna parega thujhe. 😛
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Hahahha. Uski tension mat lena. Bas Yeh bta do likhna kisne hai.
Baki return main mujhe kya milega.
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Chocolates courier to chandigarh. Pakka. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhega. 😛
Likhan kisne hai matlab?
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Hahaha, Arey main toh aise hi bol rha tha. Yeh autocorrect ne galti kari. Maine pucha ki kis topic pe likhna hai.
Life, love etc etc
ap bolo I will write and send.
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Accha. Kuch bhi likh de. 1 quote on life, 1 on love and 1 on war! Hahaha!!
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Theek hai done. Ho jaega kam. Raat tak bhej dun?
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Okies. Ek baat bata. Ye 3 day quote challenge mein one has to construct own quotes or can you just write down the famous quotes…like donald trump’s quote or some other biggie who said something and it got famous?
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It totally depends on you. Ap kuch bhi likh sakte ho. Any quote you like or anything jo apne likha hai. Personally maine toh hamesha khud ke hi likhe hain. But han ap kisi ke bhi likh sakte ho. Type of game samajh lo, to involve WordPress users.
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Ok samajh mein aaya. Ye kaisa hai. “If ever you want to rise in life sit on a needle and close your eyes” !! 😛
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Hahahahaha, bahut sahi. Mazedar hai. Dal do. Logon ne has has ke pagal ho jana.
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😉 ye mere pati ke dimaag ki upaj thi. Hahaha
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Hahaha bdi sahi upaj hai. Needle pe baithna, hahahahaha
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Namashkar Mona ji. Koi baat nhi. Thank you. Hanji yeh chandigarh Ki photo hai. Barish huyi thi thode din pehle. Usse pehle khichi thi.
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I’m looking at wordpress eye to eye, notification hi nahi aaya ki tumne publish kiya hai! hmm..
But lovely piece eh! Harsh 🙂 I’m going back to read again. Morning and evening rolled into one 🙂
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Arey koi na Ash. It’s okay.
Vaise I was waiting for your comment.
I am glad you liked it.
Also my WordPress is acting a little weird these days.
I don’t know why.
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Mujhe lag rahata tumne post kyon nahi kiya.. And there I came and you had! 🙂
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😊 how are you?
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He he! Bidass aur tum? Did you get to see that short film finally naseerudin shah wala?
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I am good. Nhi mili nhi.
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Hello Harsh, I would like to let you know that I have nomination you for 3 Day Quote challenge. Please check this out if you want to do it. Happy blogging!:)
https://healthyindiankitchen.wordpress.com/2016/07/22/3-day-quote-challenge/
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Thank you so much Mona Ma’am.
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You’re welcome😉
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Hahaha
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Beautiful poem soaking with awsomeness… loved the picture too..
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Thank you Chitra. This is where I Live. There was raining few days back.
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wow, beautiful place, feels nice and homely.
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Where are you from Chitra?
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I am from Chennai, but living in Arizona ( usa )
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I haven’t visited either of the places. Haha. But will soon.
I think you should write a post about Chennai and Arizona. Describing how is it there, places to visit, things to eat. I would be great.
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You should visit, bot are great places. That’s a good suggestion. I don’t write as I don’t have much time.. got a 8yr and 14 yr old… driving them to and fro to school and activities takes most of my free time. But thanks for the idea, may be one day I will. Arizona is surrounded with mountains, love to see them…
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I can understand Chitra. But definitely you should give yourself some time. I may be a little selfish in saying this because now I am excited to see your post about both of the places. Haha
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That’s very kind of you.. 🙂
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🙂
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Loved this poem!
I could imagine everything in front of my eyes by reading each line… Wonderful piece!
Btw, my name is Harsh too, but I am not that great writer like you…
Have a wonderful day!
😊😊😊
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Hi Harsh from Harsh. Haha.
Good Morning, I am glad you liked reading through my work.
I had enjoyed your work a lot yesterday as I had read through them. You are a wonderful writer.
Talent is something that shouldn’t be compared. You are talented and that’s all that matter.
I love your work.
Hoping to read more from you.
Your admirer,
Harsh
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Thank you so much from Harsh to Harsh 😂😂
Glad that you liked my work. I hope you read my Krishna leela episodes… I would love to get YOUR feedback on it!!
😊😊
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I will definitely.
All the best Harsh.
Haha
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Beautiful Harsh 🙂
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Thank you so much Dhwani Ma’am. 🙂
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hehehe are you seriously copy- pasting hahaha
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Hahaha hanji. Adat se majboor. 😅
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lol
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What’s up, I log on to your new stuff daily. Your story-telling style is
witty, keep doing what you’re doing!
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Thank you so much Frank. 🙂
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this was so romantic… and beautifully worded… loved it. read it twice. could visualise the scene..
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Thank you so much Ma’am. All of this was imaginary. I am glad you could visualize this one. 🙂
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