I hoped to see a little more of her.
As she passed by.
Slowly diminishing with the mingling crowd.
The wind flew from the pace I was.
Took my scent, a memory and a vision.
She had opened her sails.
The wind guided her home…
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I hoped to read little more of this beautiful poem..
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I will try to write something more. But you know this feeling, when you see someone at some place and you know that you may not see that person again. This little poem, don’t you think brings about that feeling, the feeling of wanting more…
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Oh I can totally understand. . I have been through such phases.. But we have got to be strong..
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Indeed. 🙂 whatever happens happens for good. Thank you so much
🙂
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Innocent crush. Beautiful :))
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Haha, you know how can one can be around different people. Haha. 🙂
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Hahaha… sure I do. Hehe 😉
May Peace and blessings be with you.Good night😍
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Good afternoon. Aunty ji. 🙂 how are you.
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A very good afternoon my dear. I’m good. Hope all’s well with you. BTW how’s your Mom?
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I am good ossēya. How are you. 😊. My mother she is good. And who can ever stop a mother. Haha
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I know ,a Mother is always a Mother and nothing can stop her. Glad that she’s doing well. Cheers to all Mothers!!
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Indeed. 🙂
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Its a beautiful one Kumar, loved these line “She had opened her sails.
The wind guided her home… “
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Thank you so much Chitra. 🙂
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Beautiful poem! And yeah, I know this feeling ❤
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Thank you so much. 🙂 I am glad you liked it.
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Hermosa poema, es perfecto,
Beautiful poem it is perfect.
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Wow Moe. Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome even though you didn’t share your burger King haha just kidding
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Hahaha, I can share everything except food. Haha:-P
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Hahaha 🙂 I see that you’re a real food junky. At least it makes you happy.
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Hahahaha oh yes it does. 😀
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Oh I know. You have a good evening smile Harsh
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You too Moe. 🙂
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