As breath escaped his lungs,
His muscles tired from holding on for too long,
The weight on his ankles pulling him down,
Past behind, future ahead,
He closed his eyes for one last moment of relief,
The cold sleep of many nights,
Slow death of dreams……
That’s sad but at the same time beautiful!❣❣
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Thank you Nawaz. 😇
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Pleasure is all mine!❤❤
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Hope you are well Nawaz. 😇
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I am good! What about you?
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Good too Nawaz. 😇 how’s college?
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Not that please!😅😅 Online classes still continuing!🥺🥺
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Aur kya chahiye. Ghar pe college ke mze. 😝😝😂
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Saza hain saza!😂😂
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Hahahahahahaha. I laughed so hard at this. 😝😝😝. Koi na yeh bhi beet jaega. 😝😝😂
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Fingers crossed!
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Abhi colleges open hone ki hai kuch umeed?
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Nazar to nahi aa rahi!😂😂
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Hahahaha. Last year hai tumhara? I was talking to my college professor kal. He was saying ki sabki online graduation huyi. Bechare. 😅😅
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Yeah, last year! My university are always scheduled in December….now only God knows! I’ll also now have online graduation.🥺🥺
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Awww. Kya pta tab theek ho jae scene. Let’s hope for the best. 😇
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Yeah let’s hope for the best
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All the best. 😇
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Thank you!
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Wow. This hurts.
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Doesn’t it? We all feel like this sometime or the other. And I think it’s okay to feel this. Gives us an assurance that we are only human. Hope you are well Yeshu. 😇
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Right. But only once we overcome this, we can say its okay to feel this. Theres a brighter side of everything only if we want to see.
I am all good. Thanks. Hope you doing good too.
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Indeed. Very true. 😇. I have been Good Yeshu. 😇 thank you for asking.
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Sad but beautifully written!
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Thank you Era. 😇
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😊😊
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This is so sad but expressed in a beautiful way.
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Thank you Victoria. 😇
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A beautiful tragedy that resonates deep within 💫✨
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Thank you Hannah. 😇
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It’s a pleasure, my friend 🌺🌸
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😇
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Written well.Is this a story of defeat and escape?
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Thank you Ma’am. I wrote this one thinking how sometimes somethings pull us back, making us helpless sometimes. It can be as well a story of defeat and escape as accepting a defeat may be the only way to escape something that can be avoided for our own benefit. Or it can be anything worse. Giving up on dreams is like killing one’s own soul and what’s a man without any soul. Thank you Ma’am for your insight.
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Thanks I really liked it and tried to take in all considerations possible .
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😇
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I could feel the anguish through your words….Well penned, Kumar👍
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Thank you so much Nathi. 😇 I am glad you liked this.
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Always my pleasure 😇
Keep writing and inspiring ✨✍️
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😇😇
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Very powerful poetry Kumar. I’m still laughing and questioning what you and Nawish are laughing so much about. I may have to get my friend to interpret. That was some slumber land sleep you had taking you to far off places. It’s so true that sometimes we have to accept where we are to escape it. Keep dreaming as they take us where we need to go! ❤️
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Thank you Cindy. 😇 We were talking about her college. She’s in final year of her college and I had remarked that she must be attending online classes at home which would be easy considering she was at home. To which she said that it was a punishment 😂😂. Further I asked if her college would open soon and that her graduation would happen online. She was pretty bummed. Hahaha😂😂😝
Indeed Cindy. Thank you for Such thoughtful insight Cindy. 😇 You too. ❤️
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Awwww, thanks for explaining. Very sweet. Lol, yest punishment indeed has ha. 🤣. Hard when people want to be together. It is a bummer!!!!!
You are most welcome Kumar!!!
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Hahahaha. 😝😝
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Awesome 👍👍
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Thank You Dulcy. 😇
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This is a great post! Your words highlighted the exhaustion and weariness one feels in such a situation. Perfect description! Sometimes, it’s okay to let go and stop for a moment to take it all in.
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Indeed Rishika. Thoda aram bhi jaruri hai. Exams ka kya bna? 😇
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Next week!
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All the best Rishika. 😇 fod ke ana. 😇
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Hopefully! Kaafi stress hai what with the situation and all 🤦🏻♀️
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Oh I can understand. Bas give your best there. Don’t think about what will happen next. Ho sake toh relax before. Talk to AuntyJi. It really helps. Believe in your preparation. Sab kuch sahi hoga. You rock. 😇
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Ahhh, all the motivation I need, right here! Haha, yes I’ll definitely chill out. Thank youuu ❤️
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Sab sahi hoga. Everything will fall into place. 😇
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Omg…cant stop myself flowing with these words🌸💕💕
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Wow, thank you for saying this. 😇 Feels wonderful. 😇
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Infact….thanks to you for just writing this slow death of dreams soo beautifully 😊
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😇
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Nicely penned
stay wealthy healthy safe and happy
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Thank you so much Kanika. You too stay safe. Hope you are well. 😇
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