Act Divine….

Hello there, the following is something I am trying my hands at and maybe the first one I have made public. This maybe a little too sensitive for the readers who still aren’t adult. My apologies for the same. Please skip this if you aren’t an adult. Thank You. May you enjoy reading.

Cruising along her highways green,
He had stumbled upon a cave,
The cave littered with the orbs ancient,
Pieces of her heart buried along milestones,
For long her highway was used,
Travellers stopped and proceeded,
Looked and used,
Never to return,
Never to repair,
He slowly stopped himself,
Onto the entrance pristine,
As he had thought,
For him the cave was a sanctuary,
Away from reality,
Nirvana, Moksha, Tranquility,
As he kissed her caves,
Her moist lips,
Soft, sunken, taken for granted,
Clouds brought thunderstorm with them,
Flooded with the first rain,
Their kiss seemed an oasis,
Magma had started to flow,
Taking over them,
Taking over her snowy, igneous body,
Unloved, unkempt, uneven,
Centuries passed in a whiplash,
Entangled in one another,
They slowly unraveled each other,
As she became a Chimera,
And he learnt to tame her,
Only for that moment,
He took off her vegetation,
And his asphalt,
As they lay disrobed,
In arms of one another,
The heat had risen to celsius in thousands,
His lengths concealed in her Volcanoes,
Intertwined together for eternities,
They made love to one another,
And filled the valleys with rivers,
That reflected the colour of their skies,
Blue and red,
Eons had passed as they moved from galaxies to galaxies,
And the hustling of their riveting parts,
They stopped when their cores ran dry,
And Happiness in their eyes,
Her caves were explored,
And his curiosity satisfied,
Lying naked in arms of one another,
They looked at the stars,
Witness to their act divine,
They smiled and nodded in acknowledgment,
As he watched her,
And she turned his head towards him,
Again their act had begun,
For her navel carried secrets,
He hadn’t explored,
His lengths knew stories,
She had never heard…..

14 thoughts on “Act Divine….

  1. Dear Kumar,
    Not sure how I missed this but it was beautifully expressed and if a first time reader in fact did read it, there is such innocence and I think it would be a good first chapter for them. Nice job. I wrote something that is of similiar esscence but my delivery is very different than yours. My son says first words were “Mom, too many words”. I may try to borrow some of your poetic descriptions.. Thanks, ❤️ Cindy

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    1. Wow Cindy. Thank you so much for this. I was really apprehensive of posting this online as this was a first time for something like this. To define something so intimate as this, I had to really think of my choice of words. I wanted this to stay as metaphoric as possible because even if anyone did read it, it wouldn’t feel like anything that didn’t show any effort. Defining male and female characters was the most difficult one, so as the definition of their act.
      About the first lines for the readers who aren’t adult, I thought it was my responsibility to make them aware of the contents of my this post as I wasn’t sure how they would react or what would they take from this.
      You should post yours too Cindy because that way you’ll get more and more feedback and that would really help. I am still waiting for that poem on Moon. 😇😇
      As always, I’ll be happy to help, if you need my any help. 😇😇
      Have a great night Cindy. 😇

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      1. You are so welcome Kumar. It was smart you prefaced it and it was courageous of you to share it. It worked well because of your choice of words and the tenderness of love.
        Very heartfelt!
        Mine is still raw and I am halfway through it…
        you know I think my last one was the moon one… see nothing like yours… lol!
        I appreciate your help always!!!
        Thanks so
        Much! ❤️

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  2. This is so sensuous, so earthy…….it reminds me of how the earth smells just before and after rain. U can’t describe it in words; maybe you can, but experiencing it is way better. Kumar Harsh, your words have charmed me!

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    1. Thank you so much for this beautiful description of my work here. Really loved how this felt for you and in a way enchanted me as well. Isn’t what rain is to earth what love is for us. It quenches our thirst, satisfies the demons inside, greens grow and the dirt subsides. Thank you so much again for your lovely comment. I am glad that you liked this. 😇
      If possible may I know your name so that this appreciation may be addressed to a stature. 😇

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      1. I’m Manju Bal Krishna, a teacher and a school administrator by profession. I’ve just started putting out resources for students or anybody who wishes to learn language and literature beyond classroom, curriculum and school. The lockdown has proved to be a blessing in disguise and here I am, taking baby steps on WordPress, learning something new every day and meeting extremely talented people like you.
        In case anybody needs help, do let me know or recommend beyondcbse.wordpress.com

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      2. Welcome to the wonderful community’s of WordPress Manju. 😇 It’s a very noble act that you are doing. I have huge respect for teachers and am extremely grateful to you for thinking that I know my way around words. Thank you. 😇
        I will surely contact you if I come across anyone that might need help with academics. Thank you so much for doing this. All the best. 😇

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      3. You writing is crisp, sensibilities sharp and expression fab. I mean it. I guess it’s so bcoz u love wat u do. Follow ur heart 🙂
        And thanks for promising to recommend my website. Students can get in touch is email. A govt school ( generally lacking in learning resources or not having teachers) can also benefit.

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      4. Thank you so much Manju. This really means a lot. 😇 I try to most of the times. But Sometimes isn’t viable. 😇
        Hope you have a great day. 😇 Take care.
        I will and the pleasure is all mine Manju. 😇

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  3. Its a beautiful piece Kumar, written so fluidly and metaphorically. I think you have achieved it the way you wanted it to be. I am a first time reader on your blog and I think the subleties you have displayed with your wordplay here speaks volumes and leaves the reader with so much more to imagine! Thank you for the treat.

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    1. Thank you so much Ling. It really pleases me to hear such pleasant words for something that I presented here with all my heart. 😇 I hope being your maiden visit here on my blog, it would have pleased you. I constantly try to put up more works everyday here for everyone to enjoy. I am still learning though. Thank you so much again for visiting and leaving such an amazing comment. 😇
      Hope I’ll continue to provide more treats for you. Take care and have a great day. 😇

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