
The almighty rarely crosses my mind,
For I believe in empathy that balances the earth,
My being is the carrier of dreams dissolved,
In enigmas of the world,
Love me till the day My mind conspires,
And makes me feel,
The Sun has come up due to some divine will,
Leave a little love for me to spend,
The rest of my days in peace,
I grovel and break into pieces,
Let me not bury this deep…..
Wowwww…too good… Bahat khub 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Dhanywad Soni ji. 😇😇
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लाज़वाब आकाँक्षाओं की अभिव्यक्ति एक शानदार कविता के माध्यम से ! धन्यवाद कुमार हर्ष 🧡
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धन्यवाद सिरजी आपका भी। बेहद ख़ुशी हुई की आपको मेरी ये रचना पसंद आयी। धनतेरस की आपको और परिवार को ढेर सरि शुभ कामनाएँ। 😇
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Thanks and same to you dear 💕
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Kumar, beautiful words about doubt, belief, love, and existence. I read and reread, trying for a fuller understanding. My general impression is that the poem is an honest expression of shifting feelings. Is this your intent? All the best!
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Indeed Cheryl. Any interpretation of a poem is a right one. There isn’t an exact definition of it. But you have really captured the essence of this one. Thank you so much Cheryl.
Happy Diwali to you in advance. 😇😇
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Happy Diwali to you, Kumar! ❤
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Beautifully expressed Harsh and well written. Garrett is reading it with me and say “was, he is a really good writer, I really like it.” The divine is carrying you right now as you sit with lots of feelings. Big hugs and love ❤️ Cindy
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Thank you so much Cindy and Garett. I am really glad that he liked this one. 😇😇
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You’re so welcome. I don’t generally read them to anyone but we were sitting together and he was trying to get me to close the computer. Lol.
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So well written..😊 multitalented being👍…”Leave a little love for me to spend,
The rest of my days in peace”..
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